Nice work! Nice approach!
We seem to be on the same wavelength - pun intended.
My work is also about evolution as part of the continuous
unfolding and folding of subjective consciousness as an
embedded fractal pattern. The Eternal Cycle
Cheers!
Lou Majors

http://www.thewgbhlab.org/nova_video/eternal-cycle-our-life-story
http://www.art.net/studios/lou/eternal-cycle.html

A lot of thought went into this, it seems, in its attempt to convey the science of evolution in a poetic and engaging manner. I think it is successful in this, as I learned some new biological 'concepts' from it--while my eyes were utterly captivated.

this is one of my favorites of the whole lot, and visually, it is the most unique and riveting. The male/female spoken poem manages to express evolutionary concepts w/out scientific jargon (for the most part). If this doesn't get on NOVA, then there's something wrong with the world.

Very interesting word construction and cool visuals.

beautiful!

This is great. Cool visuals, cool poem. What a cool concept, too!

a hauntingly beautiful primordial poem of evolution....and visually well done!!!!

beautiful visuals
great work George

I loved the poem, it was totally thourough, scientific, and poetic, I'd love to see it on the page. The visual effects were serene, and the call and response of the 2 voices was intriguing.

...impressed. Gave me chills. Very cool visuals, music and poetry.

Yes, I'm pretty sure that is exactly what evolution would want to say to us all......

Evolves itself even as it discribes evolution. Good open ending. So let it be written, so let it be done.

i have no purpose, only a self-organized destiny

Turned out really interesting and hypnotic. The two voices complement and the music ads to the tone.

This was a very intense and interesting piece. Gets my vote! Thanks for sharing it.